Narrative work, draft and reflection

My Grandmother is an important person to me...

Personality description:

I can say about my Grandmother that she is very affectionate because she always says warm words and also she is very sensitive too because she always moves easily, especially when she shares moments with our family. She is very wise because she always give a good piece of advice for all the family. She is too responsible because she always makes with her duties.Sometimes she is hypocondriac because she worries about her health too much and she believes that she is sick but generally there is nothing with her health. She is very tidy and organized,  not only she keeps very clean her house. She is also cautious because she always is prepared to face up many situations that  it could be or become in difficult times.

Physically description:

My grandmother was born in 1941, despite her age, she keeps her physical attractive. She is short and plump, she has short, wavy brown hair, she has a thin face and thin eyebrows and very small narrow light brown eyes and small pointed nose and also she has light skin. Her mouth is small and her lips very thin. Generally, she wears blouse and a pair of pants because It is more confortable to her.

Reflection

I think that this text, It was not too much difficult for me because It is easier when you do a list and you have named things; in this case, I had to describe with nouns and adjectives so commas are neccesary when you need to organize a paragraph.