Essay and reflection

Oktapodi

A couple of octopuses, a pink one called Pinky and a orange called Orangy, were living in a fish tank. They were in love and they were cuddling when suddenly a big hand dived and took Pinky away. So Orangy was scared and imagined that she would be cooked in a restaurant. So Orangy escaped from the tank to go rescue Pinky and he started to walk quickly climbing up the truck that was carrying, meanwhile, the man put Pinky into the cooler and he walked to his truck. Then, the Orangy was climbing up to truck and he hold on to it with his tentacles not to fall; he started to move carefully through the window because Pinky was there, near the driver. Suddenly, the man looked towards the window and he saw Orangy and he started to hit him many times to make him fall out the truck, could not throw him out and lost control of the truck and crushed with some chairs that were in the sidewalk. Orangy fell on the windscreem, so Pinky could escape from the cooler and she used the emergency brake for the truck to stop; the two octopuses were thrown into the street, the man was dazed and very angry because the octopuses escaped ; then the driver got into the truck, he acelerated and he started to persecute the octopuses but they fell into the swimming pool and they started to jump from one pool to another, but unfortunately the driver was able to catch them; however, the driver could not stop and fell down the stairs, so the octopuses tried to defend themselves and they threw ink on the face of the driver. At that moment, octopuses were hunging on a clothe line, meanwhile, the driver cpould not stop the truck and fell down to the sea; octopuses were able to escape but unexpectedly, a seagull catched Orangy with his claws; so Pinky, for a moment, was disconcerted but she decided to rescue to beloved octopus and she grabbed the clothe line with her tentacles and ejected herself to save her partner.

Reflection

In this case, I think I had not too much problem because I did the story line before that helped me to organize and to built the text; and also I only had to correct some mistakes about tense because When you write a story you need to write in past tense, It is something that I had to learn and I tried to use all rules about punctuation too.